From Just Erotic Romance Reviews:
After having his senses enhanced, Roen Decks began to mine uralium ore-an ore that is dangerously easy to explode. Meeting Kamura Shard, his enhanced sense of smell attracts him to her arousal, until he finds out that she is the distributor who has been aborting his supplies. Kamura knows that she
has to provide to Roen that she is not sabotaging his supplies. Can she mine ore and convince Roen that she's not guilty?
Drop Zone is another of the stories from the multi author series Spaceport. The plot of this story is well-written with excellent characters. I loved Kamura especially for her thoughtful and determined attitude. Roen was a wonderful male character, with his concern for his crew. After they begin to
work together, Kamura and Roen have very hot sex. I was enthralled by their sexual encounters, particularly because Roen was sure that Kamura was intentionally destroying his work. Both Roen and Kamura were falling in love with each other, even though neither trusted the other. There was an
interesting twist near the end of the book that was easily figured out, but even so, I enjoyed the story immensely.
-Marcy Arbitman
Just Erotic Romance Reviews
Thank you Marcy!!
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Thursday, July 10, 2008
Of plots and pantsers
I've been marveling at how my writing process seems to have turned a complete 180. And funny enough my friend - the wonderfully talented Lacey Savage - has been marveling about the same thing. (She has a blog about it here)
Usually I loosely figure out what my characters want and go from there. I HATE plotting. I hate it with a passion. I can never get it to a point where I like it, I paralyze myself with too many "buts" and usually by about 6K in, I decide to change everything anyway. My life as a pantser. (quick 411 -- a plotter is a writer who plots. A pantser is a writer to flies through the story by the seat of their pants)
Something changed recently. I started plotting... And the coolest thing with this new processes of plotting is that I actually ...do not.
Now I've only done 2 stories like that --but so far it seems to fly.
The first thing I do is build the world. Don't matter if its now or aeons from now. I build the rules of my setting.
Next I do a GMC chart. This is the best tool eva -- basically its a chart detailing the main characters' goals, motivations and conflicts. (Check out GMC by Debra Dixon -- its one of those must haves on the writer's shelf IMO) The GMC chart will be in constant flux, but it gives me a good jump start on the next step...
The Snowflake. Basically its a series of steps designed by a software engineer. (Google Snowflake Writing method and hit the first link.) Each step is designed to move you further into the story, and it alternates between "main story" and "characters" story. And as long as you remember that as you move forward you are allowed and encouraged to change you mind, its a wonderful tool to delve from top level of your story into the fine detail.
There's no plotting really -- it just sort of organically grows as you get to know your characters and what major events happen in the story. As you build on that, the story shapes up... So far I haven't actively plotted anything -- at least not for the sake of plotting. Instead, I figured out what happens to my characters and how they overcome their obstacles. Plot? Done.
The best part for me is the second to last step. This is where you take a descriptions of each scene and write "about" it. I can just see the dreaded "show don't tell" rule shuddering.
I "tell" each scene - writing rapid paragraphs about each scene, including anything that comes to mind about it. Bits of dialog, cool setting, a right-on-the-spot word. As I write Dark Lotus, I have the pre-draft ready in 2 nights. And some of it is really solid work.
When I open the predraft to actually write, the words just seem to pour...
Usually I loosely figure out what my characters want and go from there. I HATE plotting. I hate it with a passion. I can never get it to a point where I like it, I paralyze myself with too many "buts" and usually by about 6K in, I decide to change everything anyway. My life as a pantser. (quick 411 -- a plotter is a writer who plots. A pantser is a writer to flies through the story by the seat of their pants)
Something changed recently. I started plotting... And the coolest thing with this new processes of plotting is that I actually ...do not.
Now I've only done 2 stories like that --but so far it seems to fly.
The first thing I do is build the world. Don't matter if its now or aeons from now. I build the rules of my setting.
Next I do a GMC chart. This is the best tool eva -- basically its a chart detailing the main characters' goals, motivations and conflicts. (Check out GMC by Debra Dixon -- its one of those must haves on the writer's shelf IMO) The GMC chart will be in constant flux, but it gives me a good jump start on the next step...
The Snowflake. Basically its a series of steps designed by a software engineer. (Google Snowflake Writing method and hit the first link.) Each step is designed to move you further into the story, and it alternates between "main story" and "characters" story. And as long as you remember that as you move forward you are allowed and encouraged to change you mind, its a wonderful tool to delve from top level of your story into the fine detail.
There's no plotting really -- it just sort of organically grows as you get to know your characters and what major events happen in the story. As you build on that, the story shapes up... So far I haven't actively plotted anything -- at least not for the sake of plotting. Instead, I figured out what happens to my characters and how they overcome their obstacles. Plot? Done.
The best part for me is the second to last step. This is where you take a descriptions of each scene and write "about" it. I can just see the dreaded "show don't tell" rule shuddering.
I "tell" each scene - writing rapid paragraphs about each scene, including anything that comes to mind about it. Bits of dialog, cool setting, a right-on-the-spot word. As I write Dark Lotus, I have the pre-draft ready in 2 nights. And some of it is really solid work.
When I open the predraft to actually write, the words just seem to pour...
Monday, May 19, 2008
One thing I DIDN'T do on the weekend was write.
I painted. I made some cover art. I played with the cats. I messed around with PHP coding doing my super secret excerpt tool. I thought about writing.. A lot. I wrotea measely 1k for Devil's Isle. It had a request from an editor for some expansions, so back to the pirate lore I go.
The painting turned out to be not too bad - although it was hot as all hell standing outside:)
I painted. I made some cover art. I played with the cats. I messed around with PHP coding doing my super secret excerpt tool. I thought about writing.. A lot. I wrotea measely 1k for Devil's Isle. It had a request from an editor for some expansions, so back to the pirate lore I go.
The painting turned out to be not too bad - although it was hot as all hell standing outside:)
Saturday, May 17, 2008
I've been tagged! or 6 random things about moi
My good friend and fantastic writer Lacey Savage tagged me to post six random things about myself... As I'm a fairly random person, that shouldn't be too difficult...
The rules:
a. Link to the person who tagged you.
b. Post the rules on your blog.
c. Write six random things about yourself.
d. Tag six random people at the end of your post by linking to their blogs.
e. Let each person know they have been tagged by leaving a comment at their blog.
f. Let your tagger know when your entry is up.
b. Post the rules on your blog.
c. Write six random things about yourself.
d. Tag six random people at the end of your post by linking to their blogs.
e. Let each person know they have been tagged by leaving a comment at their blog.
f. Let your tagger know when your entry is up.
1. I can't draw. At all. I do all sorts of computer art and graphics, and I paint landscapes when I manage to get my butt out of my office.. And I can't draw a stick figure. (I can't spell either, but thats a whole other story)
2. I think I'm one of those people who are addicted to email. There's a name for that condition, but I can't remember what it is.
3. I learned English by reading Nora Roberts and watching Growing Pains and Who's the Boss. Although technically the order of that was reversed...
4. I'm a total dog person and yet somehow ended up with 2 cats.
5. I lived in Nashville TN for a year.
6. My three favorite movies are The Cutting Edge, Strictly Ballroom, and Thief of Hearts. Oh and Three Musketeers in Russian.. I was gonna marry D'Artagnan...
I tag -
Thursday, April 24, 2008
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